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Help my bleeding...
I think I've gone too deep..
It was so painful..
And now I'm numb...
What have I done...?

Help my bleeding..
Help me stay alive..
Keep me in this life.
I don't want to die....
Please....

Help my bleeding..
It's getting harder to see..
Another cut too deep...
End it all..
End it here and now.

Help my bleeding...
Kill me. Slay me.
End my pain and misery..
Save me of myself...
Of this creature that lusts..
Lusts for my death..

Help my bleeding...
Help...
Me.....
...
©2005-2009 ~lost-confused-wolf
:iconlost-confused-wolf:

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....title says it all....

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:iconkmprowler:
the only suggestion i have on this is actually in the pic. on the pants you need more fluid motion with you pencil to make the wrinkles. it wont look as stiff as what you have now. overall a great composition! i love your poem with it! did you write it or is it a song?

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its bad wrong...its badong....
:iconlost-confused-wolf:
I wrote it... And the picture is there just to get the meaning across... it was a five minute drawing so yeah.... but thanks for the comment and I'll fix up the drawing.

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I know I'm a wolf... But you could tame me...

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:bulletred:What is the biggest problem for an atheist?
:bulletblue: I dunno...
:bulletred: No one to talk to during orgasm. :XD:
:iconkmprowler:
no prob! sorry if i offended.:( but like i said the writing is really good. :D

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its bad wrong...its badong....
:iconlost-confused-wolf:
If I sounded like I was offended I didn't mean to. ^^; I'm just an angry person and I always sound a certain way. Anyway. I'm glad you thought it was good.

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I know I'm a wolf... But you could tame me...

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:bulletred:What is the biggest problem for an atheist?
:bulletblue: I dunno...
:bulletred: No one to talk to during orgasm. :XD:
:iconkmprowler:
:D

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its bad wrong...its badong....
:iconhalfbreedfang:
i like! ive said a lot of this to..."my friend" before

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"from dangers untold and hardships unnumbered, i have fought my way here to the castle beyond the goblin city. for my will is strong, and my kingdom is great...you have no power over me"~The Labyrinth

look at this!--> [link]
:iconlost-confused-wolf:
Thanks and okay... *gets point*

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I know I'm a wolf... But you could tame me...

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:bulletred:What is the biggest problem for an atheist?
:bulletblue: I dunno...
:bulletred: No one to talk to during orgasm. :XD:
:iconblue-ninja:
Lovely poem! BN's adding it to her faves XD :+fav:

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Life's a tightrope, but I'm no acrobat...

Check out my :gallery: @ [link] Give your opinions... I don't bite :D

:blackrose: R.I.P. Patrick :blackrose:
:iconlost-confused-wolf:
Thanks. :D

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I know I'm a wolf... But you could tame me...

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:bulletred:What is the biggest problem for an atheist?
:bulletblue: I dunno...
:bulletred: No one to talk to during orgasm. :XD:

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